Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that the higher authorities should spend more expenditure on train tracks
instead
of roadways. In Linking Words
fact
I completely agree with Add a comma
,fact
this
statement because trains are Linking Words
environmental
friendly and Change the adjective
environmentally
more
faster.
Change the word
apply
First
of all, railways are more environmental friendly in comparison to Linking Words
road
transport Add an article
the road
system
. To elaborate, there is no Use synonyms
cabon
emission by the trains. Correct your spelling
carbon
cabin
This
leads to less global warming Linking Words
in contrast
to the road vehicles which largely contribute to the global warming. Linking Words
Moreover
, there is no release of pollutants Linking Words
such
as sulphur dioxide and nitrogen oxide by rail commute Linking Words
system
which is detrimental to the air quality. Use synonyms
For instance
, in India, Linking Words
Delhi
metro Correct article usage
the Delhi
system
Use synonyms
lead
to a decline in Change the verb form
leads
the
air pollution Correct article usage
apply
by
threefold in a decade after its introduction. Change preposition
apply
Thus
, in order to maintain a clean environment railways Linking Words
plays
a crucial role.
Another point to consider is that trains are Correct subject-verb agreement
play
faster
and Add an article
a faster
convenient
way of transportation. Correct quantifier usage
more convenient
This
is because there is no traffic congestion on the railway tracks , unlike roadways. Linking Words
As a result
, the journey Linking Words
time
to reach the destination will be shortened. To illustrate, a study concluded that Use synonyms
introduction
of Correct article usage
the introduction
South
Korean metro Correct article usage
the South
system
Use synonyms
have
lessened the commute Change the verb form
has
time
of an average citizen by an hour daily. Use synonyms
Therefore
, commuting by train saves people Linking Words
time
, which they can devote Use synonyms
over
their family and Change preposition
to
pasttime
activities.
In conclusion, the government should allocate more budget Correct your spelling
pastime
on
Change preposition
to
train
transport Correct article usage
the train
system
rather than roads. Not only it does Use synonyms
benefits
the environment but it Change the verb form
benefit
also
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conserve
the valuable Change the verb form
conserves
time
of people due to its faster Use synonyms
to
commute quality.Fix the infinitive
apply
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