A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction do you agree or disagree?
Satisfaction
with job
is less important than a huge salary. Add an article
the job
a job
This
essay completely disagrees with the statement mentioned above because job
satisfaction
is more important for the employee to have a peaceful mind, and it also
will maintain the staff.
Having job
satisfaction
plays an important role in the employee to have peace of mind. Because of this
, happiness at work
may result to
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in
a
faster Remove the article
apply
work
content is delivered properly. To add to that the worker is satisfied with their job
's policies and procedure of his institution does the work
properly without any baggage to think. For example
, as a theater
nurse, when we perform trauma cases, even though the case will take eight hours straight and more, I know that I will take off the following day.
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theatre
Furthermore
, Job
contentment is also
an essential way to maintain the staff. This
means that provided that one, the personnel will not think to file a resignation, and continue their work
in that institution. As a consequence, the length of the service of the employee is reflected because they are happy and colonial with their work
. For instance
, senior staff in our unit work
for more than 20-30 years of service because they are pleased with their job
.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that job
satisfaction
is way more important for calmness of mind and to sustain the work force
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workforce
also
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