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our children is one of the most important
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is more important than them, but , the way of taking care and what is the best
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to treat them or keep them away
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it. In my view , I believe that using technology like mobile phones seems to be mandatory.
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both ideas.
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on them. They may be loos concentrate and
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against the technology wind !! . In fact I find
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so close to
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supervision. So , they take the benefits
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education system. Most of them assuring the using mobile phones
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for example
become more essential than before and could help kids to improve their
and showing their talents.