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some people say that it's better to teach language students in small classes, whereas others think the number of people does not matter. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #language #students #classes #matter
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Education
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really
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,
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lot of researchers tried to study it and make it easier and more beneficial . Some people believe that
number
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 of
students
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 is the main factor , others
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 them and do not consider the
number
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 as a big issue. In my
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 I do support the idea that
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 to reduce the
number
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 of
students
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 in each class for some reasons. In the following
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 we will discuss both ideas and try to
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focus
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.
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, some people are very strict
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 the idea that saying the
number
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 of
students
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is not really matter
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. They always
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focus
focuses
 on the
teachers
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 effort and the tools they use.
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 , they do think the high
number
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 of
students
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 is an advantage !! because
,
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 it makes communication among
students
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 much easier.
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, in complete contrast , other people
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 against of increasing
number
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 of
students
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 in one class. I strongly
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support
 them because
,
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 the high
number
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 of
students
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 always
distract
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 the teachers and
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bad
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 on them.
Alao
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Also
 , the
techers
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teachers
 can not deliver information to all of them. In conclusion, I do believe in education as the only way of improving any society and solving
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human problems.
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That's
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 why I support the quality of education than the
quantiny
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quantity
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