People spend less time at home than they used to. What are the reasons for this change and what are the effects on society and individuals?

It has been argued that nowadays

people

would rather spend

time

outside than stay at

home

. As far as I am concerned, the reasons for

this

issue are due to the increasing development of entertainment and outdoor activities.

However

, it may affect not only society but

also

individuals in some aspects. In

this

essay, I will discuss the reasons and provide

further

information to substantiate my point of view.

To begin

with, owing to the various choices of entertainment and

advent

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technology

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of technology

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,

people

have more options to enjoy

with

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,

for instance

, going to the cinema to watch

the

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blockbuster movie with 4D

effect

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,

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or

enjoy

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the visual reality in the department stores.

Moreover

, plenty of outdoor activities

are

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loved by generations these

days

.

For example

, going surfing and getting tanned on sunny

days

, and

enjoying

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hiking and camping with friends. All of the above reasons appeal to enjoy their

days

outside

instead

of staying indoors at

home

.

On the contrary

, spending too much

time

outside utterly has some pros and cons for both societies and individuals.

Firstly

, there is a positive impact

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economic development, enhancing the GDP of the country.

In contrast

,

people

’s activity will cause more trash to the natural ecosystem,

for example

, the beach and the hiking route. As for the personal part,

although

people

have the opportunity to pursue their own happiness ,

nonetheless

, spending less

time

at

home

means generally spending less

time

with families,

hence

, the family bond is weaker than

the

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previous generation. What’s more, individuals are lacking

of

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time

to pursue the inner peace by staying at

home

which is quite important for

people

In conclusion, it’s true that

people

spend more

time

outside these

days

due to more

appreciations

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out there, and it surely affects the

economics

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and our own happiness in the positive aspects, yet it will cause pollution to the environment and less affection with family and ourselves.