People spend less time at home than they used to. What are the reasons for this change and what are the effects on society and individuals?
It has been argued that nowadays
people
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time
outside than stay at Use synonyms
home
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this
issue are due to the increasing development of entertainment and outdoor activities. Linking Words
However
, it may affect not only society but Linking Words
also
individuals in some aspects. In Linking Words
this
essay, I will discuss the reasons and provide Linking Words
further
information to substantiate my point of view.
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To begin
with, owing to the various choices of entertainment and Linking Words
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the advent
technology
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of technology
people
have more options to enjoyUse synonyms
with
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for instance
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the
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enjoy
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Moreover
, plenty of outdoor activities Linking Words
are
loved by generations these Change the verb form
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days
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For example
, going surfing and getting tanned on sunny Linking Words
days
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hiking and camping with friends. All of the above reasons appeal to enjoy their Change the form of the verb
enjoy
days
outside Use synonyms
instead
of staying indoors at Linking Words
home
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On the contrary
, spending too much Linking Words
time
outside utterly has some pros and cons for both societies and individuals. Use synonyms
Firstly
, there is a positive impact Linking Words
to
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on
the
economic development, enhancing the GDP of the country. Correct article usage
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In contrast
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people
’s activity will cause more trash to the natural ecosystem, Use synonyms
for example
, the beach and the hiking route. As for the personal part, Linking Words
although
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people
have the opportunity to pursue their own happiness , Use synonyms
nonetheless
, spending less Linking Words
time
at Use synonyms
home
means generally spending less Use synonyms
time
with families, Use synonyms
hence
, the family bond is weaker than Linking Words
the
previous generation. What’s more, individuals are lacking Change preposition
in the
of
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time
to pursue the inner peace by staying at Use synonyms
home
which is quite important for Use synonyms
people
In conclusion, it’s true that Use synonyms
people
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outside these Use synonyms
days
due to more Use synonyms
appreciations
out there, and it surely affects the Fix the agreement mistake
appreciation
economics
and our own happiness in the positive aspects, yet it will cause pollution to the environment and less affection with family and ourselves.Replace the word
economy
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