A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’ Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter  Describe what the book is about  Explain how the book influenced you  Say whether this book would be likely to influence people.

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Dear Sir I am writing

this

letter to let you know how much I was influenced by the

book

- "The journey of success". It is a real story of a common man who overcomes his struggles with his dedication and commitment to

achieve

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his goals. Though I have read many books so far in my

life

this

book

is a special one as It has changed my way of thinking, helped me to take faster decisions, and plan my future better. Apart from

this

, It made me more productive, and effective at the work. The way the author narrated the story is simply amazing. Many believe that

life

is so complex,

however

, the

book

proved it is wrong because everyone's

life

is in their hands, and one has to choose the right path to be successful in

life

. Since the

book

contains valuable information, I strongly believe all the readers will get influenced eventually. Apart from that, the

book

is written in a simple language to ensure everyone understands it clearly.

Additionally

, the cartoon images on every page are impressive as half of the story will be understood from them.

Finally

, I want to thank your publications for publishing

such

wonderful books and look forward to seeing many more excellent books. Regards Simhachalam Gouroju

Submitted by simhagouroju on Sat Apr 16 2022

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