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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

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The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of the
Canadian
 workforce in each industry in 1850 and 2020. These
industries
 comprise Manufacturing, services, agriculture and fishing, construction, energy and water.
To begin
 with, the rate of
Canadian
workers
 decreased significantly in three different
industries
 (manufacturing, agriculture and fishing and
also
 energy and water). In manufacturing,
for instance
, a 27 per
cent
 fall can be seen.
Moreover
, the rate of
Canadian
workers
 in agriculture and fishing fell to only 1 per
cent
. In energy and water,
however
,
this
 decrease was only 2 per
cent
.
Lastly
, a rise in
Canadian
workers
 can be seen in two categories (services and construction).
this
 rise is significant in services (an increase of 48 per
cent
), but it is more moderate in construction
industries
 (an increase of 3 per
cent
). To conclude, there was a decrease in the rate of
Canadian
workers
 in some
industries
 and an increase can be seen in others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • security
  • time-saving
  • cashless transactions
  • dependence on technology
  • privacy concerns
  • accessibility issues
  • financial vulnerability
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