Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past

Almost everyone agrees that
children
should
respect
their
teachers
... but personally, I believe nowadays it seems that the
respect
of
children
towards their
teachers
or even for their parents
have
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decreased tremendously... I feel
this
way
because of
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two reasons... which I will explore in the following, assay.
To begin
with, the new theories about upbringing the
children
; It has been said that parents should not have strict rules for their
children
... and they should not punish them...
Therefore
,
as a result
, the child will not fear anyone... including their
teachers
....or they will not feel ashamed of their
behavior
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.... so, they feel free to act in the
way
they desire. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of
this
... I had a colleague at work... and he has a
9 years old
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9-year-old
boy
... some days he brings his
boy
to work... The
boy
is always free to do whatever he wants... he even has a rude
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... and ....has never been taught how to behave in front of others.....nor punished for his action. One day,
while
he was playing around in the office, he said a rude word to our manager and went
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But his dad said nothing to the child... and has only apologized to the manager.
Furthermore
, because of the online classes
due to
the pandemic of Covid-19....
teachers
are no longer strict. When
children
realize... that they can behave and speak to their
teachers
in their own
way
... without being blamed for their
way
of acting and behaving....surely they will continue to do so.
For instance
, the
boy
I was talking about... one day had an online class....
While
he was in the class, his teacher said something that he did not like... and after shouting
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microphone, he left the class without permission. Of course, the teacher reported the child’s
behavior
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to his father..., but he said nothing to his
boy
. Based on these experiences, I strongly think.... that the new generation has no
respect
for their
teachers
and for other people in general. In conclusion, I think nowadays
children
have no
respect
for their
teachers
.
This
is because they do not have a strict upbringing at home from their parents and at school from their
teachers
, and
this
is shown in their
behavior
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towards others, even in front of their
teachers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Societal values
  • Dynamics
  • Digital technology
  • Undermining
  • Authority
  • Child-centric
  • Interact
  • Awareness
  • Advocacy
  • Individualism
  • Voicing
  • Comparing
  • Punitive
  • Dialogic
  • Glorifying
  • Dissent
  • Confrontation
  • Egalitarian
  • Unilateral
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