Some people think it is important for children to take lessons outside the classroom, for example by visiting places such as local companies or public buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

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out side
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the
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children
children's
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children
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for learning is very
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useful
. It will give extra
knowledge
if students got
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to go outside
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school
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like local companies and public
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. I am of the opinion that extracucculer makes more experience
to
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children. so,
i
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agree with
this
statement
following here.
Firstly
, The
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very popular in the world
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education is learning by doing. we have been following
this
statement
all over the world but only a few
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apply
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. Most of the student's
knowledge
are
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limited
on
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the
school
.
Moreover
, All the
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children
childrens
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children
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are curious that what is made by
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which is
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surrounding
to them. Visiting the companies, they can find out the method of production
practiclly
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practically
. It would be more effective than
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.
Secondly
, Agriculture subject is not likely to learn only in
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.
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should go farmhouse for practical
knowledge
.
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Furthermore
,
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of
civil
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programme is
also
practical
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subject, for that students should go industrial area and
community based
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building while running of course after that students will be satisfied with their subject.
Thus
,
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realistic
knowledge
,
must
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one must
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go to field
visit
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visits
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and
survey
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surveys
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. That's why
i
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support
to
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these
essay
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. In conclusion, without visiting of
otuside
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outside
from
school
, student's learning will be incomplete. Local
company
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companies
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and industries can play
vital
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role
to
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learn
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education
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the education
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sector.
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people
beliefe
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believe
belief
that
improtant
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important
for children to take
lession
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lesson
lessons
outside
from
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School
.
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