Some people think it is important for children to take lessons outside the classroom, for example by visiting places such as local companies or public buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

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for learning is very

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if students got

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to go outside

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like local companies and public

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. I am of the opinion that extracucculer makes more experience

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agree with

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following here.

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education is learning by doing. we have been following

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all over the world but only a few

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are curious that what is made by

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which is

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to them. Visiting the companies, they can find out the method of production

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, Agriculture subject is not likely to learn only in

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should go farmhouse for practical

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practical

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subject, for that students should go industrial area and

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building while running of course after that students will be satisfied with their subject.

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realistic

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support

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. In conclusion, without visiting of

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outside

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, student's learning will be incomplete. Local

company

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and industries can play

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learn

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education

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sector.

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important

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