Your friend has asked you to help him/her to ﬁnd a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher. write 150 words

Dear Rohan, Hope you are doing well! I am writing

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letter to inform you about the music instructor who is located in our city. One of my friends gave me a reference for a music teacher, as his son learnt to play guitar from him. He mentioned that the tutor has 10 years of experience and is extremely talented. He teaches multiple instruments efficiently.

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, he has joined an NGO where he teaches the same to underprivileged students. The Music Instructor teaches both adults and children. I think he is appropriate for your son, as he carries a number of awards. I have enclosed his details

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letter. You can directly call him or send an email and enrol your children. I believe he will learn it in less time. I will look forward to seeing you again next weekend in the Geo Park. Yours truly. Gaurav

gaurav5251028

Oct 16, 2025

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structure

Put one main idea in each paragraph to make it clear. Start with the goal in the first line.

grammar

Fix small grammar and word choice. Use learned instead of learnt and avoid 'enclosed' in a simple letter.

content

Give clear contact details, like a phone number and email, and how to reach him for a trial.

tone

Keep a friendly but formal tone throughout the letter and end with a ready sign-off with your name.

tone

The letter has a warm opening and polite closing.

content

It states what the teacher does and why he may fit the child.

content

It mentions how to contact the teacher.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

150 words

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