It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinctiom To what extend do you agree or disagree about this What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed teach good behavior to children

The early ages of childhood are the best time for a

child

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to learn ways of distinguishing right from wrong and the involved people in their fostering have always been using

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as an incentive to deter them from doing bad things.

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should be avoided and neither

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of

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should be used to nurture a

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Punishment

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can result in several negative consequences that do not worth its benefits.

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of all, it is a dangerous

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that can hurt a

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physically and even result in their death.

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, even the non-physical types of

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can

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their sensitive mental health. A good example of it

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the parents who take their

offspring

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favorit

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favourite

toy without realizing

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fact that it can cause the feeling of insecurity and fear of loss. The other

disadvantages

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of

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for the ones who are executing it.

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is because the impacts of their actions return to themselves eventually.

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,

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leads to a

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's sadness and hatred toward them which are not desirable for anyone. Based on the above-said rationals, none of

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punishment

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methods should be conducted.

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, encouragement of doing

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things by giving children presents has had better outcomes.

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, buying

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for a

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who shared their toys with other children, motivates them to do it again while avoiding

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with them after drawing on walls contributes to the suppression of their talents in drawing. To sum up, the physical and mental disorders caused by

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should not be underestimated.

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should completely be avoided and replaced by the opposite

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which is positive re-enforcements due to better outcomes it is followed

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