In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Whoever you are, wherever you are, you need a place to live. In some big cities, people are still used to renting a

house

to live in and they consider it extremely popular. Many

other

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suppose that having a

home

rather than renting

one

. I agree with

this

opinion. Living in your own

home

, you will save a lot of

money

when you do not have to pay for the use of equipment, furniture and rent a

house

.

Instead

of spending a large sum of

money

every month

for

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rent a

house

and the appliances that come with it, when we own

one

, we just have to purchase the items once and enjoy them for a long time, without incurring any more costs.

For example

, my friend rents a

home

with

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for

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seven million a month

include

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air

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an air

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conditioner, refrigerator, television, etc, while he can buy a new

one

and

no

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not

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need

paying

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to pay

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anymore. Another important thing is that we will feel comfortable and everything is more convenient in our own

home

than

a

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in a

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rented

one

. Living in a rented

house

, everything you use has to be paid for and of

course

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,course

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if you accidentally damage them, you will have to pay extra to the landlord or spend

money

to fix them. My friend had

such

a situation, he forgot to turn off the stove, smoke was already rising everywhere, causing fire alarms and automatic sprinklers

worked

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to work

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. That got everything in the room wet and he had to pay for repairs, as well as damages to the landlord. The difficult thing is that in order to own a

home

, you must have the funds to purchase the

home

as well as all of its contents.

As a result

, everyone will need to work hard for many years in order to save adequate

money

.

This

is both a challenge and a motivator for them to work harder. Because owning a property with your own

money

implies you are entirely financially self-sufficient and have your own space, you are free to do anything you want with it. Owning a

home

is extremely important, not only for some people but

also

for most people. Living in your own

home

is both comfortable and convenient, as it eliminates the need to pay monthly rent and provides you with a private space that makes you feel free and

cozy

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cosy

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whenever you are weary of working. I will

also

work hard to earn

money

in the future so that I can own a

house

for myself.