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You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: Explain the problem Suggest a solution Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

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Dear xyz, I hope you are fine. I was a bit busy for the
last
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 few days, which is why I could not meet you,
although
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 I had planned many times. My working hours have changed, so I have to wake up early to manage my work. Since
last
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 month, my whole family and I have been suffering, as we are both professionals, so our day is quite busy, and we only have evening time to spend
together with
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 the kids. The problem is that the loud music voice bothers us a lot. You know my old mother is with me , and she needs rest, as her health is not allowing her to stay up late at night. Continues laughing and the noise of footsteps disturbs us, and we are not able to sleep properly at night. I suggest you reduce your activities and please keep them lower after a certain time , or continue your activities on weekends only. I hope you will think about it and reduce your activities. If the problem continues, I will report it to the building management and authorities. Your Neighbour Jhfigvmh

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task response
Task response: You answer all parts, but some ideas can be more clear and more direct.
task response
Task response: Use a polite tone all the way. Some lines sound a bit strong.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, problem, solution, and warning. This is good.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Link ideas with simple words like because, so, and also.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Keep one main idea in each paragraph to make it easier to read.
task response
Task response: You explain the noise problem clearly and give a solution.
task response
Task response: You say what you will do if the problem does not stop.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The order of ideas is easy to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a greeting and a closing.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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