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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the world of crime, there are two perspectives,
first
 one views the committer as a victim
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 his own circumstances which should be put into consideration in courts, while the
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 point of view treats the committer by book, as he should be treated in law. Undoubtedly, any criminal has his own purposes
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 he commits any type of
crimes
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, some of them are
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 while the others are sane
people
. Some of them were exposed to
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 pain in their lives
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 example, violence or emotional manipulation that pushed them to be what they are, others are too poor that they would do anything for cash and
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 are psychos.
Although
 there are always strong reasons behind criminals, some
people
 do not feel any pity for them at all; they only see the extent of damage they caused for the real victim and have no mercy for the committer. Criminals cause huge damages
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 as murdering a spouse who has kids or rubbing a bank which leads to
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loss
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 for the clients and the company itself. So it is somehow hard to feel sorry for a criminal when you see
on the other hand
 the great loss of the victim. In my opinion, I believe that we should follow the law as it is and each sinner should take his punishment as it is to make him always be reminded of what he did. There are
people
 who are living in misery but still not
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 any crimes, these
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 as models for criminals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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