Some people think it is better for children to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe that it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vocations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe it is conducive for

children

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to have small frequent

holidays

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in a year while others deny

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fact that less but long

vocations

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are good for them.

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essay will discuss both views and

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my own opinion in the conclusion.

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with, a segment of society is in favour of small and frequent breaks during the course of one year for

children

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as it may act

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a

stress

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buster for them. To clarify,

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nowadays study’s difficulty level has been ramped up so high, resulting in

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huge

stress

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among

children

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.

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,

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approach may help them to release their

stress

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and regain their energy for

studies

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their studies

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.

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, if

frequency

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of small

holidays

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is high,

children

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may spend enough time with their parents and

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may lead to

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the strong

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bond between them.

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a survey conducted by Oxford University, in March

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2016 manifestly unveiled that

children

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found many small

holidays

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beneficial for them,

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helped them not only to cope with study

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but

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to

strenghthen

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strengthen

their bonds with family members.

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, fewer and long

vocations

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have their own pros in the form of better concentration and exploration of innate qualities. To elucidate,

children

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can contribute more in their academics with their full capacity if there are fewer but long

vocations

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for them.

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,

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can improve their inner talents like dancing and painting during these long

vocations

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as these activities

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time. To conclude, people demand small and frequent

vocations

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for

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in a year, in my opinion, long but fewer

holidays

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are the best suitable for

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due to immense focus on studies and improvement in inner skills.