Some people say that every human being can create art,for example painting.Others think only the people born with the ability can create art.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Art
is a very beautiful creature
which
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made by
people
. They
makr
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make
people
inspire,
feel
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and feel
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relaxed. Painting is a type of
art
. In my opinion, everyone can draw.
People
who are busy with painting are very
talanted
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talented
,
able
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and able
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.
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Furthermore
, there is no work
which
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that
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is impossible
On the other hand
,
unable
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an unable
the unable
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person can not create
art
. Truly, everyone has a
talant
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talent
. But it means everyone
create
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creates
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art
or draw painting.
However
, if
person
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a person
the person
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has a
talant
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talent
, he or she must practice often. Because only
talant
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talent
is not enough.
Person
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A person
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improve
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improves
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his or her skill bu practising. In conclusion,
talanted
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talented
people
create beautiful
art
rather than others.
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