Some people believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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is a valuable chance that should not be underestimated, especially in childhood. While some people are promoting the idea that spending

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for extra education is quite critical for a

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to be a productive member of

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society, others consider it as an unnecessary pressure. I am convinced that giving

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opportunity to a

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to do things they want is more effective for them being successful. Those who advocate educational programs indicate valuable points.

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of all, studying more leads to performing better at

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, which often means having better scores and being accepted

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reputed universities. They often take the example of well-known universities like Harvard and Stanford which choose the candidates based on their high school scores.

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, by performing better and being compared with peers, their

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increases and the compliment they receive

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as a positive re-enforcement that encourages them to try harder.

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, a

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who is introduced as the best student

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a class experience the enjoyment that not only is good for their mental health but

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contributes to a

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hard worker

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to achieve more. Despite the above, playing games has always been viewed as a necessary activity for a

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to improve.

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is because playing with others helps them to learn communication skills which are as essential as

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education.

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, even the students who are accepted

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Harvard university should be able to pass their interview by

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demonstrating

their communication skills.

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that, these activities improve their other talents. Not all successful people

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necessarily

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have educational degrees. A good example of it is

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football

players who spent their childhood playing on

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. To exemplify

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,

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famous

artist like Mutzard spent their childhood playing

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piano

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of learning mathematics.

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, people believe giving a

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the permission of enjoying their free

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as they

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want

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help them find their way. To sum up, one can say extra educational activities in leisure

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are critical for a

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to have a better future.

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, I believe that learning communication skills and working on other talents are far more critical because even students with good scores are being evaluated by them eventually.