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Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

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Tourism
 is one of the perfect ways to spend your holidays, and it brings more benefits
such
 as additional income and new visitors to the
country
 and they
overcome
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 drawbacks that are encouraged by
tourism
. On the one hand, some tourists may ignore local rules and break laws which
lead
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leads
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 to negative consequences for both tourists and the government. It is worth mentioning that for countries that just started encouraging
the
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tourism
an
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 economical side might be an issue because there will be a chance that
spendings
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 might not pay off and
as a result
,
economics
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 of the
country
 will slightly or dramatically deteriorate.
On the other hand
, a stream of lots of new people brings a lot of money and if it is a famous person, he or she will significantly augment the popularity of the visited
country
 and it is a huge advantage for developing countries, especially if a
country
 has a wonderful nature or fascinating and modern constructions.
Consequently
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the
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income and recognition are the major pros of
the
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tourism
. In conclusion, the encouragement of
tourism
 is followed by advantages
such
 as
additional
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the additional
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 source of income and popularity to the
country
 but at the same
time
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 it is risky due to reasons like inadequate tourists and high prices on new constructions which might not pay off.
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