Social media has amassed large user bases. Do the advantage of being a part of social media site outweighs the disadvantage?
Nowadays, social
media
is one of the major parts of living. People can receive and gain any information
from anywhere in the world
via the internet
, this
is really convenient. In my notion, being a part of social media
have more advantages than disadvantages and I am going to explain in the following paragraphs.
First
, in the previous era before the world
has the internet
we use different types of communication systems such
as pigeons, that carry letters ,then
I think this
method is tardy and complicated. However
, today in the world
of technology we have various sorts of social networks such
as Facebook, Skype, Discord and Whatapps etc. and these all can bring the world
smaller than ever. For example
, some families do not live together in the same mansion or apartment maybe their parents live in their homeland but their offspring are living abroad, nevertheless
, they can keep in touch with each other by using social media
.
Second
, information
and data from untrustable sources can be easy to be tracked and checked. Back in the day, we can only consume news from television and newspaper. These kinds of information
sources can be simply controlled by the government and it means citizens have no right and no freedom to receive the facts. For instance
, if you are in a country, that is
strict with their citizens to consume only the information
from government mass media
and disallow their residents to reach the internet
, this
means the politicians can do anything that they want. But if you are in a nation where you are free to audit any sources of data that you can opt what staff you are going to believe, will it be better?
In conclusion, the internet
and technology do not have only advantages because the coin always has two sides. So this
is our responsibility to choose the better way to use them.Submitted by phuchanate on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...