It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

These days scientists and visitors are able to visit other places

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distance

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,

such

as the South Pole. In my opinion, the advantages of

this

trend outstand the drawbacks. In the following paragraphs, I will explain both sides in detail.

To begin

, there are a lot of advantages of being able to have long trips. It is a fact that the fast development of new technologies and transportation

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provide

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a chance for people to visit far

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.

Furthermore

,

this

may give priceless experience and lasting memories for a lifetime.

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, visiting

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parts of the world can

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improve

the understanding of

natural

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environment.

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,the provision to explore a less-frequented environment could open doors to many new studies and help researchers discover many more new species of flora and fauna.

However

, there

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are

several disadvantages of having

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trip

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.

Firstly

, individuals need well-

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developed

equipments

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to visit another area without

need

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something. But, it is a fact that special tools are too expensive and not everyone

able

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to buy

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.

Secondly

, the

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negative aspect of

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idea is

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extreme weather

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, which are dangerous for people's lives.

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, the travel expenditure

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also

costly and needs

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a huge budget.

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,

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one

of the most main drawbacks is the lack of environmental awareness amongst nations.

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, due to the unknowledge of the main rules, some residents are not careful,

so that

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this

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leads to negative results,

such

as being unable to adapt and live

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another conditions

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Therefore

without knowing the obligations and being

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,

this

may have a hazardous ending In conclusion, while an unexplored land may have a lot to offer in terms of resources, science and aesthetics, I strongly opine that some places should be treasured with limited human interference and I believe that

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the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.