You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, •give details of the ad that you want to publish •mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page •say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

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Dear Editor, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

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letter to advertise my apartment in your newspaper which is available for rent from next month.

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the area is not quite big it is suitable for a small family or a couple.

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, the property is available close to the city centre and all amenities are very near. It is close to the bus stop

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parking is included in the rent.

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, it has two rooms, one kitchen, one bathroom and a beautiful balcony where you can enjoy the view of the city.

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, the advert will be published on the first page so that more readers can read it. As you know,

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adverts on the middle and the

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page are ignored by most of the people.

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, I already paid for the advertisement online with my credit card and enclosed a receipt with

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letter. Please, publish my ad for renting the apartment

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Saturday. So, I can rent it from the start of January. I am very thankful to you for publishing the advert in the newspaper. Yours Sincerely, Love

tajinder.panagSat Dec 30 2023

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that the logical structure of the letter follows a clear pattern, with each paragraph focusing on a particular aspect of the request. Consider using transitional phrases to enhance the flow between paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The greeting in your letter should directly address the editor using a conventional title such as 'Mr.', 'Mrs.', 'Ms.', or 'Dr.', if known. The closing could be improved by using a more formal sign-off such as 'Yours faithfully' when the recipient's name is not known, which is more appropriate for formal correspondence.

Coherence & Cohesion

Each paragraph should maintain a separate idea clearly and concisely without overlap between paragraphs. This has been adequately done in your letter, maintaining a good focus in each section.

Task Achievement

You did a good job in addressing all parts of the task with sufficient detail. However, clarify if you would prefer a particular date for the ad to be published or any other specific instructions for the advertisement.

Task Achievement

Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout your letter. Avoid using colloquial expressions such as 'doing great' and informal sign-offs such as 'Love'. Instead, opt for a neutral or formal tone that matches the serious nature of your request.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

189 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

apartment
rent out
advertisement
front page
details
monthly rent
number of rooms
amenities
location
contact information
urgency
reasonable rates
tenant
editor
local newspaper
publish
payment method
exposure
prime location
family-friendly

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