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at present the population of some countries, includes a relatively large number of young adult compared with the the number of older people

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Nowadays the
population
 of teenagers will rise. In some countries compared to elder populations. It is no debit which age group are important to build the nation some
people
 were arguing about the increased youth
population
 is more effective rather than the older
people
.
This
 essay will explore both opinions and express the negative and positive side    On the one side hand, the
Population
 of youth impacts the country's economy,
for example
, they do industrial work, military, farming etc, In industries they do manufacturing and heavy work compared to older
people
 they don't do because of the age limit
moreover
 younger
people
 give service to
nation
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 as an army, navy airforce, and police.  
On the other hand
, the
Population
 of older
people
 are giving benefits to national development by a giving their experience  to the youngster because senior
people
 have more real-life experience   In conclusion, the above views I can understand and my opinion is both
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 together. So works are done fast, accurate easily done and
also
 contributed strongly to the country's economy and development
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