Hope you are doing well. I am extremely grateful for your guidance that enabled me to land an interview with one of my dream companies to work as a digital marketer. I am writing this letter to ask you for further assistance, wondering if you are willing to write a letter of recommendation for me.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I had ordered a 1 TB Seagate hard

drive

from Amazon on Feb 12 and found the data cable missing in the shipment received today. I had been eagerly waiting for the delivery as

this

drive

was supposed to be a gift for my younger brother, who had recently enrolled himself for a graduation course in computers at IIT, as a token of appreciation for his hard work. Unfortunately, the cable required to run the

drive

was not found in the package, and

thus

, I was not able to pay my regards to my little sibling for his achievement. I request you to kindly replace the incomplete product received with a new one, which has the data cable intact with the hard

drive

at the earliest. My order details are INR2315G and I can be reached at my mobile, 9569248091, for any queries, if required. Hoping for a quick response. Regards, Harmanpreet Singh 9569248091

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Hope you are doing well. I am extremely grateful for your guidance that enabled me to land an interview with one of my dream companies to work as a digital marketer. I am writing this letter to ask you for further assistance, wondering if you are willing to write a letter of recommendation for me.

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Do you think that ageing society will disapear? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having more old people in society?

Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therfore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent fo you agree or disagree

Some people think that Olympics games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympics is a waste of money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extent do you agree or disagree?