Hope you are doing well. I am extremely grateful for your guidance that enabled me to land an interview with one of my dream companies to work as a digital marketer. I am writing this letter to ask you for further assistance, wondering if you are willing to write a letter of recommendation for me.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I had ordered a 1 TB Seagate hard
drive
from Amazon on Feb 12 and found the data cable missing in the shipment received today. I had been eagerly waiting for the delivery as
this
drive
was supposed to be a gift for my younger brother, who had recently enrolled himself for a graduation course in computers at IIT, as a token of appreciation for his hard work. Unfortunately, the cable required to run the
drive
was not found in the package, and
thus
, I was not able to pay my regards to my little sibling for his achievement. I request you to kindly replace the incomplete product received with a new one, which has the data cable intact with the hard
drive
at the earliest. My order details are INR2315G and I can be reached at my mobile, 9569248091, for any queries, if required. Hoping for a quick response. Regards, Harmanpreet Singh 9569248091
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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