Hope you are doing well. I am extremely grateful for your guidance that enabled me to land an interview with one of my dream companies to work as a digital marketer. I am writing this letter to ask you for further assistance, wondering if you are willing to write a letter of recommendation for me.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I had ordered a 1 TB Seagate hard

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from Amazon on Feb 12 and found the data cable missing in the shipment received today. I had been eagerly waiting for the delivery as

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was supposed to be a gift for my younger brother, who had recently enrolled himself for a graduation course in computers at IIT, as a token of appreciation for his hard work. Unfortunately, the cable required to run the

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was not found in the package, and

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, I was not able to pay my regards to my little sibling for his achievement. I request you to kindly replace the incomplete product received with a new one, which has the data cable intact with the hard

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at the earliest. My order details are INR2315G and I can be reached at my mobile, 9569248091, for any queries, if required. Hoping for a quick response. Regards, Harmanpreet Singh 9569248091

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The Greeting

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Hope you are doing well. I am extremely grateful for your guidance that enabled me to land an interview with one of my dream companies to work as a digital marketer. I am writing this letter to ask you for further assistance, wondering if you are willing to write a letter of recommendation for me.

The Greeting

Everyone should consider becoming a vegetarian as consuming meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The apartment that you have rented was repaired recently. Later, you discovered some defects in repairs. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain what the problem is suggest how it can be fixed say what you would like the landlord to do about it.

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Government in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar some think that these taxes are a good idea while other disagree. Discuss both you and give your opinion?

Some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks, while others believe that people of all ages should be allowed even if they don’t do well in school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.