In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people in many countries. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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will be the elderly in the years to come.

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is a negative development. There are two main reasons for

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demographic shift in many countries. The major force is the advancement in medical science. More specifically, due to

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progress, many ailments, which were incurable in the past, are now curable which were incurable in the past.

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, people can take preventive measures,

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as vaccines, in order to stay safe from deadly diseases like cholera.

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, the average human lifespan has increased significantly. On top of that, the rise in living expenses is

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is because when the living cost is too high, young couples become more inclined to adopt birth control with a view to keeping their family size small, so they can ensure

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life for their offspring. On the

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is a negative development.

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will have a detrimental effect on the national economy. To elaborate, when a nation’s

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is dominated by older generations, the country will have fewer physically fit and active people.

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means that the national workforce will shrink and there will be a less economically active

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, senior citizens will increase government expenditure.

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is largely due to them being unemployed and are highly likely to depend on

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social safety programs. In conclusion,an advanced healthcare system and rising living

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are the main driving forces behind the dominance of an ageing

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should be perceived as an unfavourable development as not only will it slow down the economic growth but the elderly will

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drain the economy.