Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel thier funtionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The architecture of
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attracts most
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. In our society,
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some
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believe that the structure of the building should be the main matter,
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think that the operations of the town take more value. In
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essay, I will discuss both views.
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with, the design of the building is the main reason for the attraction in most cases.
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, in foreign countries, there are many beautiful architectural goods are designed, and generations come to see these.
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, memorial ownership
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as the Taj Mahal, Golden Temple, and many more places increase the beauty of the cities.
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, if the towns are built beautifully,
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it increases tourism in that area and businesses
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expand as well. On there
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, the service must be excellent
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. There are many hospitals, and schools that do not provide better facilities even though, they have good architecture.
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, if the functionality of the town will be good
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will gain more knowledge services, and they will not have to run to other cities. In my opinion, both have their own important place. Culture does not attractive if buildings do not look good, and
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will not like to live in a city without good facilities.
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