Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some

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prefer to travel to other

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for fun and entertainment. Some

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say that it is not profitable for the

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that

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prefer to travel to. I completely disagree with

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statement. In the

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I will explain why it is more beneficial,

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it has some negative consequences.

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with, I think that exactly tourism industry is one of the main industries that provide employment for the population of a specific region.

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sector promotes

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growth of the country,

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brings foreign currency, which contributes to the

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of its currency at the international level. Tourists have always been and will be an important part of any country, as their travel

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many sectors,

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as hotel accommodation, taxi fare, visits to local shops, infrastructure, etc.

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, a survey conducted by the Kazakh government showed that the survival of approximately 15% of the world's

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depends mainly on tourists. Another important point in the tourism industry is, of course, the mutual exchange of culture, food and lifestyle.

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, whenever foreigners visit a country, most of them prefer the respective cuisine to avoid health problems while

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, so to provide

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need, their appropriate food is adapted to tourist destinations.

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, in Germany, most

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travellers

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are Americans, and

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, American burgers have become so widespread that they have become part of the German cuisine and even the city

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has been renamed in

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of

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American dish. In conclusion, unless there are extraordinary bad conditions visiting other states would not have a negative impact on the

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.

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, I believe that it is very beneficial for each member of the

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and

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should do

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of journeys.