Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some
people
prefer to travel to other countries
for fun and entertainment. Some people
say that it is not profitable for the countries
that people
prefer to travel to. I completely disagree with this
statement. In the next
essay
I will explain why it is more beneficial, Add a comma
,essay
although
it has some negative consequences.
To begin
with, I think that exactly tourism industry is one of the main industries that provide employment for the population of a specific region. This
sector promotes economic
growth of the country, Add an article
the economic
also
brings foreign currency, which contributes to the Correct word choice
and also
enhancing
of its currency at the international level. Tourists have always been and will be an important part of any country, as their travel Replace the word
enhancement
increase
many sectors, Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
such
as hotel accommodation, taxi fare, visits to local shops, infrastructure, etc. For instance
, a survey conducted by the Kazakh government showed that the survival of approximately 15% of the world's countries
depends mainly on tourists.
Another important point in the tourism industry is, of course, the mutual exchange of culture, food and lifestyle. For example
, whenever foreigners visit a country, most of them prefer the respective cuisine to avoid health problems while traveling
, so to provide Change the spelling
travelling
this
need, their appropriate food is adapted to tourist destinations. For example
, in Germany, most travelers
are Americans, and Change the spelling
travellers
as a result
, American burgers have become so widespread that they have become part of the German cuisine and even the city Hamburg
has been renamed in Change preposition
of Hamburg
honor
of Change the spelling
honour
this
American dish.
In conclusion, unless there are extraordinary bad conditions visiting other states would not have a negative impact on the countries
. On the contrary
, I believe that it is very beneficial for each member of the countries
and people
should do these kind
of journeys.Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
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