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Every country should have a free health service even if this means that the latest treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To that extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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As the healthcare system grows prosperously, more and more countries enjoy good
health
services
.
However
, there are still some peoples who don't have the ability to afford therapies.
As a result
, some
people
 consider all nations should have free
health
services
 even without the latest cures. As far as I am concerned, I highly agree with
this
 viewpoint as I think it can ensure safety and it is
also
 fair.
To begin
 with, free
health
services
 can give everyone the opportunity to get
treatments
 and ensure safety. As some
people
, especially middle-class families or
people
 in poverty may not have enough financial support to pay the high bill of a cure, they may consider not to having a treatment, which can lamentably deteriorate the illnesses. The free service gives
people
 chances to enjoy treatment regardless of their background and finances.
Therefore
, they can see a doctor on time which preserves their
health
 and safety.
Besides
, the free-of-charge policy is fair as
people
 can choose
treatments
 based on their ability.
For example
, the rich can have the latest
treatments
 if they want as they can pay the high price while
people
 who need the free
services
 can
also
 have the right to heal.
As a result
, it guarantees all citizens can have
health
services
 but
also
 remain differences between
treatments
. In a conclusion, I strongly agree that nations should have free
health
services
 as it can protect the poor from severe illness and
also
 be fair.
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