You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the food served in your hotel. Our company had an all-day meeting

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Saturday and the largest conference room was rented. There was a survey among participants and people loved staying at your hotel for several reasons.

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of all, the people who participated in the meeting were pleased with the spacious rooms.

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, the stunning vista from the majority of rooms was an edge over other hotels.

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, many pointed out the high level of service and hospitable personnel who were eager to aid in any circumstances.

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, myriad participants called for an action towards the food served. On that day seafood was not fresh enough and some could smell a foul odour near mussels.

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, the restaurant turned out to be overcrowded posing an inconvenience to members participating. They had to queue for a long time and were tardy to an afternoon part of the meeting. Our company is planning to host some more meetings and I would appreciate your immediate attention to

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matter in order to iron out the aforementioned issues with food. Yours faithfully, Mrs Jones