desribe the charts. the nubmver of people who got medals in the olympics.

Both
chart
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charts
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illustrate
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illustrates
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which
country
have
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has
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won the most
medals
. The bar
chart
shows the number of gold, silver and bronze
medals
each
country
gained in
Winter
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the Winter
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Olympic
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Olympics
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. But the line graph only shows each
country
have
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has
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the most
medals
in
summer
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the summer
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Olympics
. Overall the bar
chart
states that Norway achieved
most
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the most
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medals
, and
also
gained
unequal
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an unequal
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number of gold silver and bronze. The number of each
medals
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medal
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are
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is
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double compared
to
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of
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Canada. Are the result of the summer
Olympics
or
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quite
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quiet
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quite
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different,
therefore
, with the USA having the most
medals
and overall gained approximately 2500
medals
. The
second
highest
country
with the most
medals
is
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in
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USSR. Whereas France
in
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fifth place I have the lowest
medals
. To
summaries
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summarise
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,the bar
chart
and graph States how many
medals
each
country
gained in both
Olympics
but the result of each
Olympics
are different.
In both
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USA, USSR and Germany are successful.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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