You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference. Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to request to present a presentation on python programming in our company that will be helpful for our development staff. I was on

holidays

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last

week and visited

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. I attended a computer programming

confference

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conference

that was arranged by the Google developer community. I want you to give me special permission to conduct a training session to share my knowledge with others. If I talk about the duration and topics, it might take 2 days and will be covered the latest algorithms strategies and development techniques topics. I am sure that it will be a great achievement for me and my team to

trian

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train

our

employess

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employees

. Anyone from senior developers can participate in the training. It would be a better thing if you allow me to do it in our company's auditorium hall

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because sitting arrangement, mic and other required facilities

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available there. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Hafiz Mahmood Hussain

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