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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved

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transport
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 plays a pivotal role in everyone's life, the amount of
time
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 we spend on
roads
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 is creating havoc in our life too.
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 essay will state some issues related to the scenario and the solutions to improve the same. Talking about the causes of
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 delays, there are two significant problems which we are dealing with today. One of them is overcrowding of
roads
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, with increasing population, it is becoming more difficult for
people
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 to cope with the increasing number of cars on
roads
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 as citizens prefer to travel by their private vehicles.
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, in a decade, there has been an increasing number of private cars in UAE which in turn harming the
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 system to a great extent. Another reason is bad weather conditions. Sometimes things get delayed due to heavy rains.
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, stagnant water and pit holes
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 add to the misery of
people
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. Long queues and traffic jams make it difficult for
people
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 to reach home in
time
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. A survey shows 90 % of
people
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 reach late at home during bad weather. The best cure for these problems is to use the public
transport
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 system.
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, using the metro is not only effective during heavy traffic
time
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 but
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 when the weather is not suitable for a particular day. Even though one has to commute to the station but they can assure to reach their required places within
time
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.
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, if the government make strict rules regarding using public
transport
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 during weekdays for working
people
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, it will not only reduce traffic on
roads
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 but
also
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 help the government more money from public service. In conclusion, it can be clearly seen that
transport
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 delays are common in everyone's life but
people
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 can overcome
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 problem if they think wisely and start using public
transport
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.
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