Many people think dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

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think that risky and unsafe
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games
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should be prohibited.
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, I don't agree with
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idea, since dangerous
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give anyone feels energetic and adrenaline. Yes, there are many dangerous
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in the world and some individuals pass away from hurt or injury,for
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,reason parents want to ban the risky and unsafe
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games
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in order to not play their children these types of
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, because some parents, especially mothers are storm in a teacup.
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, healthy or just normal
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say extreme
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instead
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of dangerous
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, but for children and for orderly
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ought to be banned. Some youngsters are emotional and want to try everything and want to feel more energetic and adrenalin. So do I.
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, from an early age, I dream of doing paragliding, skydiving and surfing. And in the future, maybe I try to do them In conclusion, I want to write that, without extreme, dangerous
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we cannot live.
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, it is better, to ban unsafe and risky
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for children and elderly
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. But the youth, especially, adults want to try everything and we had to allow them to do
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