The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the global distribution of
forest
and timber
in five continents (South America
, Africa
, Asia, Europe, and North America
).
From an overall
perspective, it is clear to see that most of the world’s forests are in Africa
and North America
, followed by Europe, South America
and lastly
Asia. By contrast
, Africa
possesses the least timber
, while
North America
has the most.
Looking at North America
and Africa
, the former continent represents a quarter of the world’s forest
,
and the latter 27%. In terms of Remove the comma
apply
timber
, the figure is slightly higher for North America
, which accounts for 30% and drastically lower for Africa
, at just 9%.
Forest
and timber
proportion is quite similar for the other regions. The European continent contains 18% of the world’s forest
and 20% of its timber
respectively. South America
is marginally lower than Europe, specifically at 16% for forest
, Add an article
the forest
while
is moderately higher at 23% for timber
. Finally
, Asian forests constitutes
14% of the global total and 18% of all Change the verb form
constitute
timber
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