The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the global distribution of
forest
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and
timber
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in five continents (South
America
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,
Africa
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, Asia, Europe, and North
America
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). From an
overall
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perspective, it is clear to see that most of the world’s forests are in
Africa
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and North
America
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, followed by Europe, South
America
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and
lastly
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Asia.
By contrast
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,
Africa
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possesses the least
timber
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,
while
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North
America
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has the most. Looking at North
America
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and
Africa
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, the former continent represents a quarter of the world’s
forest
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and the latter 27%. In terms of
timber
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, the figure is slightly higher for North
America
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, which accounts for 30% and drastically lower for
Africa
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, at just 9%.
Forest
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and
timber
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proportion is quite similar for the other regions. The European continent contains 18% of the world’s
forest
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and 20% of its
timber
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respectively. South
America
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is marginally lower than Europe, specifically at 16% for
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forest
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,
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is moderately higher at 23% for
timber
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.
Finally
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, Asian forests
constitutes
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14% of the global total and 18% of all
timber
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber, america, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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