The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the global distribution of
forest
and
timber
in five continents (South
America
,
Africa
, Asia, Europe, and North
America
). From an
overall
perspective, it is clear to see that most of the world’s forests are in
Africa
and North
America
, followed by Europe, South
America
and
lastly
Asia.
By contrast
,
Africa
possesses the least
timber
,
while
North
America
has the most. Looking at North
America
and
Africa
, the former continent represents a quarter of the world’s
forest
,
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and the latter 27%. In terms of
timber
, the figure is slightly higher for North
America
, which accounts for 30% and drastically lower for
Africa
, at just 9%.
Forest
and
timber
proportion is quite similar for the other regions. The European continent contains 18% of the world’s
forest
and 20% of its
timber
respectively. South
America
is marginally lower than Europe, specifically at 16% for
forest
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,
while
is moderately higher at 23% for
timber
.
Finally
, Asian forests
constitutes
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14% of the global total and 18% of all
timber
.
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