Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

The tourism industry has developed globally these days. Holidaymakers show various interests

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choosing the tourist attractions. There are a wide variety of

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from the Sahara Desert to the Antarctic.

visitor

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aim to travel to the spots to gain many new experiences whether positive or negative which are inevitable. These

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could be the habitat of animals

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the wild ones. So excursion to them is likely to face many dangers. Wild fauna can easily prey on humans who are not able to defend themselves since they do not have the required experience. It probably leads them to injuries which can be a disaster. All

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of the world cannot be the

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tourists’

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destinations. Having

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in

habitat

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the habitat

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of animals could destroy their homes which will end up in

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the migration

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of animals to new

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in order to find safe and

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spots.

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to

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the extinction

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of some rare species.

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, people can disturb the cycle of the environment which will be detrimental

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their future. Many

tourists

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especially the ones who are more adventurous tend to go to new

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with hostile

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whether deserts or poles to experience new invaluable achievements. The most important matter would be that they learn how to act in extreme circumstances that they have not experienced

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before. They will become more endurable and patient. These trips and tours let

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leave their comfort zone,

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familiar with other parts of the world rather than repeated destinations and even particular creatures. They will

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expand their horizons and learn how to live better

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rest of their lives. In conclusion, harsh

condition

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conditions

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places

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have become the destination of many

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. The danger of being injured and disarranging the cycle of

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the environment

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are the drawbacks. Learning and gaining desirable experiences are

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advantages.