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Workers often retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working as long as they want. What is your opinion on this?

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 often by some
people
 that it should be legal for older
people
 to work after the age of retirement.My opinion is that
this
 statement is completely true, and I am going to give examples about it.
Firstly
, the moment that old
people
 get unable to work,when they do not worth money,
this
 situation makes them depressed,the type of
life
 they are going to live,or it can create new ideas,whether the sort of
life
 they live will be suitable or not for them.Preventing these kinds of situations gives better opportunities for them.
Secondly
, I would personally say that working creates new relationships between
people
, they get to know each other well,
likewise
 making friends even they are very old.And, I would like to add that, working increases public either physically, or mentally.
Also
, doing the job that you love gives you motivation, and energy to live and not die. As it is given, it is not obligatory, it is connected to the person. They can either continue to build their career in old age or if they agree to get retired, it is
also
 understandable. After a huge job
life
 that they did, it is normal to choose
this
 option. To summarize, I sharply believe it will make older
people
 happier.
Such
 as building new relationships, and making new friends name a few.All these activities increase adrenalin in the body.
Thus
, it has a higher chance to live a long and happier
life
. There
also
 can be other methods that can be said. But, I strongly believe that the information given below is enough.
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