Some countries pay extremely high salaries to people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree?

In the times of today ,there are high-paid jobs in the market . Some tend to take a
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. I completely disagree with the stance and would enunciate vivid reasons for the same in the discourse ahead followed by my opinion. Higher post designation leads to higher pay.
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level of skills or immense power of mind
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salary annual package. Salary
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a race between employees. Eventually, employees do their best to get
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and higher pay.
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become more
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on their work and indirectly
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overall productivity is
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person would feel motivated when he
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, motivated workers are given
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performance
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have higher responsibility in the
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responsible for any action in the
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any rules or
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any changes in
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profile and
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Indian
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is CCD. After many years of financial struggle
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to change the core members of the
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largest coffee making
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if individuals
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motivated towards
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over
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become more productive. In conclusion, high pay to higher executives is actually beneficial.
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to
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impact on any
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difference between
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levels is eventually beneficial.
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  • barrier to entry
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