Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that a big metropolis is not an adequate place to live in as the environment of it is harmful to dwellers' health. Regarding

this

, I strongly agree with

this

assertion, and there are certain reasons. To

begine

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begin

with, major

cities

have faced serious

air

pollution As the population has increased, people are increasingly using transportation including private cars. Not only does the excessive use of cars emit

exhust

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exhaust

fumes, but it may

also

contribute to

air

pollution in urban areas, thereby leading to major health problems

such

as

athma

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asthma

and pneumonia

For example

, recent media in Korea reports that the quality of

air

is much lower in

cities

compared to

rular

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regular

ruler

areas, and

therefore

cities

have more number of

patents

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patients

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who have respiratory illnesses than

countryside

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the countryside

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.

Furthermore

, if an infection

occur

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in urban areas, it would cause devastating results. since citizens are not able to maintain

certain

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a certain

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distance between each other due to a lack of place, infectious illnesses cannot be

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banned

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baned

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banned

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from spreading.

For instance

, a survey conducted by the Korea Health Foundation has revealed that the infection rate of tuberculosis is 30% higher in major

cities

than in

outskirts

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.

Therefore

, living in a city means a dangerous means of being healthier. In conclusion, as a matter of clustering in

cities

, living in

cities

is not a good idea as people suffer from respiratory diseases due to

air

pollution, and they

also

fail to keep a distance, thereby leading to spreading infection.