Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that a big metropolis is not an adequate place to live in as the environment of it is harmful to dwellers' health. Regarding
this
, I strongly agree with this
assertion, and there are certain reasons.
To begine
with, major Correct your spelling
begin
cities
have faced serious air
pollution As the population has increased, people are increasingly using transportation including private cars. Not only does the excessive use of cars emit exhust
fumes, but it may Correct your spelling
exhaust
also
contribute to air
pollution in urban areas, thereby leading to major health problems such
as athma
and pneumonia Correct your spelling
asthma
For example
, recent media in Korea reports that the quality of air
is much lower in cities
compared to rular
areas, and Correct your spelling
regular
ruler
therefore
cities
have more number of patents
who have respiratory illnesses than Correct your spelling
patients
countryside
.
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the countryside
Furthermore
, if an infection occur
in urban areas, it would cause devastating results. since citizens are not able to maintain Change the verb form
occurs
certain
distance between each other due to a lack of place, infectious illnesses cannot be Add an article
a certain
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banned
baned
from spreading. Correct your spelling
banned
For instance
, a survey conducted by the Korea Health Foundation has revealed that the infection rate of tuberculosis is 30% higher in major cities
than in outskirts
. Correct article usage
the outskirts
Therefore
, living in a city means a dangerous means of being healthier.
In conclusion, as a matter of clustering in cities
, living in cities
is not a good idea as people suffer from respiratory diseases due to air
pollution, and they also
fail to keep a distance, thereby leading to spreading infection.Submitted by hiasince38 on
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