Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend to you agree?
It is argued that educational systems should give similar opportunities to both men and women to get
administration
into different Add an article
the administration
specialties
. I totally agree with Change the spelling
specialities
this
argument because this
will create an equal situation among all genders and also
females are doing better than male
in some subjects.
One of the main reason Fix the agreement mistake
males
to
Change preposition
for
this
argument is that educational systems must have
Unnecessary verb
apply
admit
both Change the verb form
admitted
gender
in Change to a plural noun
genders
same
field of Change the article
the same
studies
and gives them Fix the agreement mistake
study
same
opportunities in all Correct article usage
the same
universities
around the world. For example
, in many development
countries, one can find an equal system in accepting Replace the word
developing
applicable
in the same fields regardless Replace the word
applications
their
sex. Change preposition
of their
This
means,
they have the chance to study Remove the comma
apply
at
the same subject as men in a suitable space to present new ideas and enrich their skills.
Another noticeable reason why gender is not the main case in studying different subjects is the student's merit rather than their gender-specific. Change preposition
apply
This
mean
, Correct subject-verb agreement
means
being
Correct word choice
that being
a
masculine or feminine does not affect their ability to perform. Change the article
apply
Thus
, most universities
in the world looks
at Change the verb form
look
person's
achievement background Correct article usage
a person's
not
their gender. Add the comma(s)
,not
For instance
, a recent study has showed
that most colleges select candidates based on their performance and not whether they are men or women. Change the verb form
shown
Also
, an equal administration of students in colleges will also
improve the universities
reputation.
To conclude, educational institutes like universities
should not administrate students by their genders,
but should accept them by their merit and give females Remove the comma
apply
same
opportunities as male applicants.Correct article usage
the same
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