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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern era, it is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that despite the fact that
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 programs have been developed,
people
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 should learn a
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. Regarding
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, I strongly agree with
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 assertion since learning a
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 is beneficial
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 long run.
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 technology can change grammar and spelling automatically, a
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significant
 number of
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 have become independent.
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panic state among
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. A survey conducted by the Korea Labour Foundation has revealed that almost 20% of
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 who work at international companies sometimes experience difficulties when electricity is not provided owing to natural disasters and a lack of
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. Because they cannot translate by themselves, they felt a sense of frustration. As the example clearly illustrates, learning a
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 and not
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 on technology can be a key factor in dealing with
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unexpected circumstances when working at international companies.
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, machines are not adequately sensitive to
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 various
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.
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, it is not able to consider various tones and accents.
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,
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the meaning of words is different depending on tones and accents in some countries.
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, recent media in Korea reports that the
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 of “Ah” has more than 5
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 in Korea regarding the way how to speak, and
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,
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 foreigners use
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.
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, using
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 program cannot replace
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learning a
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. In conclusion, while I accept that
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 made
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’s lives conveniently, there is no doubt
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point out that it cannot replace
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learning a
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 since there are a lot of variances.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural Appreciation
  • Cognitive Flexibility
  • Idiomatic Expressions
  • Career Advancement
  • Multilingual
  • Proficiency
  • Empathy
  • Cultural Barriers
  • Native Speaker Fluency
  • Colloquialisms
  • Language Acquisition
  • Immersive Experience
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