Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relavant example from your own knowledge.

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suggest that universities should be open to everyone. Allowing
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with different levels of academic ability to join the study programs. As far as I am concerned, I stand for the opposite side as I think admission can impede progress and bring negative effects on students.
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with, allowing
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with low academic ability can impede the schedule. As those
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may not have enough background knowledge, they cannot understand and follow the classes. 
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, in order to let them catch up, the professor may need to slow his pace.
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, the professor may need to repeat the same idea as an explanation.
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results in a disturbance of progress. Apart from
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, joining the college's study programs can be stressful for those who didn't meet the academic standard.
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, the chemistry course required lots of glossaries, without the special training, students can barely know what the professor is saying.
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, even if they want to learn, the high requirement may stop them from the beginning. The basic things which they don't have can bring high pressure, which can eventually convert to stress and negative mood. In conclusion, I don't think universities should permit
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with low academic knowledge to enter the programs as it can disturb the class and
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bring high pressure to those
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