You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with an all-day meeting that I recently arranged for my company at your hotel. We conducted a feedback survey about their experience, we found that participants loved the hotel.
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, they all were dissatisfied with the food quality which was served at lunch. All attendees had a great experience. They admired the courteous behaviour of your staff.
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, they were pleased by the cleanliness of the hotel, especially of restrooms.
On the contrary
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, they all were disappointed by the quality of the food which was served at lunch. It was a lot spicy which caused respiratory problems in many employees.
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, the menu was not having many varieties, especially for vegetarians. I would like to suggest making some modifications to the lunch menu to add a few more dishes for vegetarians.
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, it would be better if the spiciness of food could be kept lower. Thanks in advance for your support. Your's faithfully, Gurpreet Kaur
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