You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • Say what the participant liked about the hotel. • Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. • Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with an all-day meeting that I recently arranged for my company at your hotel. We conducted a feedback survey about their experience, we found that participants loved the hotel.
However
, they all were dissatisfied with the food quality which was served at lunch.
All attendees had a great experience. They admired the courteous behaviour of your staff. Linking Words
Additionally
, they were pleased by the cleanliness of the hotel, especially of restrooms.
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On the contrary
, they all were disappointed by the quality of the food which was served at lunch. It was a lot spicy which caused respiratory problems in many employees. Linking Words
Moreover
, the menu was not having many varieties, especially for vegetarians.
I would like to suggest making some modifications to the lunch menu to add a few more dishes for vegetarians. Linking Words
Besides
, it would be better if the spiciness of food could be kept lower.
Thanks in advance for your support.
Your's faithfully,
Gurpreet KaurLinking Words
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