nternational tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Nowadays, the

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international

tourism

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plays a vital role in every

country

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. It is considered by some that it

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a great number of advantages to different sectors while there are others who believe that it can be harmful

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the local essentials

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as the living species and the landscape. On the one hand, it is obvious that the

tourism

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sector is able to help the development of both the citizens and the

country

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itself.

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, due to the widespread

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tourism

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, the

civillians

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civilians

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educational

background

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are allowed to choose a wide range of job opportunities.

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, the people who haven't finished their secondary education can work as bell

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and

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in hotels while those with high

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holder can get the upper role in the travel agencies.

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,

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international

tourism

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takes an essential role to get

foregin

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foreign

currencies so

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the

country

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has to use

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for the development of other sectors

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as trading, business, etc.

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, it is undeniable that some of the localities might suffer the negative effects owing to the improvement of

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.

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, the places for the living species have been changed into tourist attraction areas so that those species find it difficult to survive from the lack of living space.

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, those man-made tourist attractions must have recent technological products like air-cons and

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automobile

for transportation and that can harm the environment

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as

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of

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temperature to some extent. In conclusion, the

country

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can achieve many positive impacts from

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but there are some disadvantages

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sector. In my opinion, the

intensivity

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intensity

of those

unevitable

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inevitable

issues can be decreased by using different kinds of methods

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as using eco-friendly products in all the tourist attraction areas. So, I believe that the advantages of

tourism

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outweigh

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disadvantages

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