There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more improtant than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Imagine a world without
music
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; too boring right? There are many types of
music
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all around the world, each type has its own origin, while some of them are created lately with no specific root, which
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usually named Trending
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. These types of
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are normally created by individuals and shared on social media to
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be
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come
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the most booming genre for the
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being, afterwards, every now and
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appears the latest. Speaking about
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, it is the life of the moment and the identity of countries, each country has its own national anthem which declares who it is and how its people are.
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, each homeland has its own
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traditional
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which defines it and puts a special mood to it.
Music
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has great powers
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how to express your feelings in a way that will never be forgotten due
music
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is
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memorized, which clarifies why the easiest way to teach children is by creating songs for them. One can listen to
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in all situations and moods, it relaxes you, hype you up
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parties and helps you cry in your sadness; truly it is,
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the life
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of the moment. Nowadays, Trend has
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over due to the world of social media. All countries are gathered on the same platform which led to mixing cultures and losing identities. New generations forgot their traditions and see them as old fashioned, they are now creating their own new styles.
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, each era had its own genre of
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, whenever you hear any old melodies you automatically refer them to a certain period of
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and make you travel through
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to recall every detail during that
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. At the moment, most of the trending
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became loud,
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noisy
and unfortunately, carrying many bad meanings and disrespectful words
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old classy ones. In conclusion, countries should never give up on their
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traditional
songs and
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no matter how new generations view them as uncool because they carry part of its identity, while, concerning international
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, they should be filtered and checked before spreading to make sure they are clean and clean songs which can be
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heard
heared
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by all ages and crowds.
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