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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In a set of
countries
,
tourism
 has become an income-producing service, but its drawbacks should
also
 be taken into consideration.
However
, the benefits surpass the disadvantages. I agree with
this
 idea to some extent, and in the upcoming paragraphs, I will express my take on
this
.
Tourism
 is a high revenue-producing service almost globally.
This
 is all because of globalization. On the one hand, in
majority
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the majority
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 of
countries
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 the government takes
this
 into account and tries to work out plans to attract as many visitors and vloggers as possible especially
on
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during
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 vacation season using different tools
such
 as types of marketing ones especially influence marketing and social media marketing.
This
 results in an increase in
employment
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 rate. And a lot of jobs become vital during that period.
For instance
 the work of guides and drivers which become very active. But when it comes to economical problems, here we encounter a huge problem. Tourists are sometimes inattentive and fill the
countries
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country
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 with garbage and trash.
This
 can lead to
tremendous
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a tremendous
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 amount of economical problems
such
 as
the
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deforestation and
the
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air pollution.
On the other hand
, the government can raise awareness among locals which in their turn can pass to the citizens of other
countries
. To sum up, it can be noticed that the advantages outrace the drawbacks.
Consequently
, it is a good option to make
tourism
 a vital source for
economy
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the economy
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. And the government should take as many steps as possible to allure the tourists and try to reduce the
environmetal
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environmental
 issues caused by
tourism
.
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