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Violence in films has led to a number of problems in society. What are these problems and how can they be solved?

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At the present time, It is hard to find folk who are never watching movies. Whenever the audience is going to watch any movie, Many
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 of criminal
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 are shown to
people
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. For that reason,
People
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 are falling into many
kinds
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 of difficulties as well as creating enormous ferocity for the country. In the
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bellow I am going to discuss the problems and solution
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 of all, By watching cruelty in cinema,
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 are getting used to those
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 of unkind activities. Most of the time apathy for torment began to vanish.
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, At the time of wrestling individuals are going aside. In case a rival got any kind of injury, he/she gets pleasure. Which is the cause of the increasing cruelty of humans.
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, Whenever any
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 of series reveal any kind of lawbreaking
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. Some
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 of delinquent
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 get inspiration by observing the tactics and techniques.
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, a few days ago I read the news that some Youngman became inspired by watching a crime series and they began to kidnap children and enforce their parents for money. For getting rid of that kind of
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, Government must need strict with the rule of censorship. All
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 of open media platforms must have to control by the central server of government. Apart from
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, punishment for the above
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 must need to strict. In conclusion, In spite of its difficulties to handle a unilateral, whenever mass
people
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 will come forward it will be easy to solve.
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