You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. say how much cooking you have done since the course. suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer. Write at lease 150 words.

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Dear Mr Smith, My name is Adam Wilmer and I am very happy to inform you that recently, I have completed a short cookery lesson from your cookery institute named "Learn to Cook". I am writing
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letter to provide my valuable feedback.
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of all, I would like to thank you and the academy teachers who helped me a lot to complete my cookery course in
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Food. Throughout the program, I enjoyed not only various
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dishes but
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other cuisines as well.
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, my major subject was
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food, I tried almost everything at my home and my parents liked all the recipes which I had learnt at school.
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, I have made
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pizza
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week for my younger brother's birthday and that lavish dish was appreciated by almost all the guests. I am deeply humbled by your institute for facilitating
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a nice course.
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, It would be more beneficial if you can offer a lesson on pastry designs. I really admire your efforts to deliver the best courses in the town. Yours Sincerely, Adam Wilmer
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