some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recucled . They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legalo requirement . To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste ?

There is no doubt that an insufficient amount of trash from homes is recycled so some people believe that to solve
this
problem, governments should enforce some legal prescriptions
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recycling products. I believe exploring the cause of
this
problem can assist in finding
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suitable
solutions to help resolve it.
Firstly
, a lack of information is more likely to contribute individuals to waste things without thinking about
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them.
hence
, governments should raise environmental awareness about recycling,
in addition
,
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can consider some public regulations to
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the proportion of their trash in each region.
for example
, Finland and
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are extremely successful in recycling most of their daily waste because their citizens are aware of the advantages of recycling.
Secondly
, another point to consider is the fact that governments can address
this
issue by contributing individuals to do volunteer projects in order to
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motivate experts who can lead and prepare local communities to adapt
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themselves
to recycling
although
it requires too much effort
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countries
such
as Australia establish an environmental organization to educating volunteers and, in turn, people embrace
this
method and develop a
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of responsibility about the nature.
therefore
, they yield desirable results. To conclude, I think the
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the
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government
can make a
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legal
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requirement
and raise public awareness
also
it can manage a volunteer project and remedy the situation. In my opinion, these are steps in the right direction.
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