Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.To what extent you agree or disagree?

It is argued that celebs are more popular for their luxurious lifestyle and glamour than

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accomplishments and

this

misleads the

youth

in the wrong direction.

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essay completely agrees with the statement. I believe

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portrayal of themselves as having a lavish life has made the

youth

insecure about themselves and made them set unrealistic goals.

Celebrities

flaunting their beauty and physique on social media has made the

youth

believe that following the same lifestyle will actually make them successful. Young women,

in particular

, develop an inferiority complex when they compare their faces and figure to those of actresses.

Instead

of focusing on their personality and developing some soft skills, they start investing in cosmetics and plastic surgery so that they can imitate their favourite actor or actress.

Consequently

,

celebrities

encourage the

youth

to invest more in materialistic things than in personality development. A lot of famous personalities on television give

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fake speeches

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how they accomplished so much in so little time. As the

youth

tend to believe whatever they see on any media platforms, they set unachievable goals for themselves without realising that these

celebrities

haven’t tasted any big success yet and are just faking it so that they can stay relevant.

For instance

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) a famous celebrity called Kendel Jenner is more famous for her social media platform as it has millions of followers but in

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she does not seem to have any real talent whatsoever. In conclusion, when

celebrities

flaunt their beauty and wealth, they make ordinary people, especially, youngsters feel inferior and

hence

, in my opinion,

this

practice of them promoting their extravagant lifestyle is indeed bad for

the

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society.