With a growing work population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a larger number of people. some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past twenty years or so, the world population has grown at a much faster speed than before. Some food scientists believe that
GM
foods
may become a solution to feed a larger number of people
, while some nationals or citizens in developed countries think that these GM
foods
have unpredictable effects on human bodies and environments. This
essay will discuss both viewpoints and provide my opinion about why I consider that GM
foods
may be a method to save more people
in the world.
On the one hand, it is generally accepted that the population in the world has been growing at a faster speed since the Industrial Revolution happened. That is
, more advanced and convenient innovations or inventions have been created or invented to assist our human beings to live better and more efficiently. For instance
, GM
foods
such
as wheat and soybeans have brought the Green Revolution to feed more people
and avoid famine in many developing countries which are mostly located in Africa or South America.
On the other hand
, it can be claimed that some nationals and citizens assume that GM
foods
may cause new problems in our current environments and human bodies. That is
to say, these GM
foods
may be unpredictable because many research papers have pointed out that they may influence people
's health if they intake too many GM
foods
. This
perspective seems to be possible that can affect some people
to believe that GM
foods
might be dangerous. However
, the whole benefits of GM
foods
outweigh their drawbacks because these GM
foods
could have more yields or resist many extreme climates such
as floods and droughts.
In conclusion, it can be asserted that GM
foods
have their pros and cons, but I still consider that these GM
foods
can bring more benefits to human beings because of more yields and higher resistance to extreme climates.Submitted by jackson05234 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
