Many people nowadays are concerned about the level of air pollution created by the number of people using air travel. They suggest it may be safer for people to use alternative forms of transportation such as road transport. To what extent do you agree that travel by road may be the safer option?

In

this

day and age,

air

pollution

is progressively increased

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the number of people

traveling

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by

an

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airplane

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. While some people say it is possible that using alternative methods of

transport

might be safer for

travelers

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, I equally agree and disagree

on

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this

statement and

this

essay will outline the reason for

this

.

Air

transports consume numerous fossil fuel which is

a

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dirty energy causing toxic

pollution

. It affects detrimentally

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humans who

breath

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in undesirable

air

quality.

As a result

, people are likely to get aspiratory

disease

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leading to governments spending extravagant money on health care Not only is it not safe for

environment

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and

human

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, but the cost of

air

travel is expensive.

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, visiting

countryside

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by

an

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airplane

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sometimes

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considered more expensive compares to a car because of surcharge fees like baggage and insurance fee.

Also

, public road transports are even more economical

options

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.

In contrast

,

air

transport

could not be substituted for the reason of

time saving

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. Especially in international businesses,

aircrafts

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are crucial for

import

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importing

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or

export

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exporting

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merchandises

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if the company balances the possible effects and benefits of using

airplanes

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.

Although

pollution

from

air

transport

is the substantial

downsides

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from

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developing various industries, the

economics

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in

tourism

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countries

rely

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mostly on

this

means.

Moreover

, it is a potential tool to help increase

rate

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the rate

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of employment in a country resulting in a huge income for

government

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to improve a country. In conclusion, whereas I believe

air

transport

releases

pollution

, there are other several factors to be considered as causes of

air

pollution

.

However

, I think using alternatives should be considered for

better

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environment.